Her life, not much,
cringing at any kind of touch
Starring into nothing, velleity of the time covered her face. A sigh, wimpier, tear fell down, surely there is more left, innermost drown
Will, to live, to remain in this life. Tomorrow will come and go, again.
New day begins, time is not wasted, healing never ends
Continue on my courageous friend even in a solicitude state, time is of the essence, no reason to wait! Remember the beauty, of this wonderful life. A freedom of worries, the reasons to fight. Happiness…
Much Love 💜 Much Life
I think it’s really great because you’re getting to your real voice and your stuff and it’s very authentic. It seems to me however that it could use some tuning up. I might be wrong about that. Anyway the upside is really the important thing. when you get to the real stuff it’s like having the goose that laid the golden egg rather than just a golden egg.